1. Read your descriptive paragraph aloud to a friend. 2. Ask for their feedback and cirlce anything they have discussed. 3. Edit your work for spelling, punctuation and grammar. 4. Refer to the Engaging My Reader Checklist - highlight and tick any descriptive or figurative language devices you have used. 5. Try to add examples of any devices you have missed. 6. When you are happy with your work, tap to upload a photo of your completed text. 7. Tap twice to submit your work to your teacher.