Try hard to use different language features and sentence types in your writing. Write over the picture. Try and use personification in your writing. Add a very short sentence using red writing. Add a 'ed' start sentence using blue writing. Add an adverb start sentence using yellow writing. Find out what a metaphor is and try to add a metaphor to your writing. Can you add a question into your writing. Try hard to make the story as exciting as you can using level 3 verbs and adjectives.