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Amelia Thomas

Sick Sentence

Grades: 4th Grade, 2nd Grade, 3rd Grade
Subjects: Writing

Student Instructions

This sentence is ‘sick’ and needs help to get better. Can you help? Make this boring sentence better by adding descriptive language and 'show don't tell' sentences. The boy held on to the fish. It was a big fish with big fins and a big body.

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