INVITATION TO REVISE 1. Look at the sentence and think of another fronted adverbial that could replace the one highlighted in green. 2. Use the Said is Dead and Sick of Said word bansk to help you choose a synonym for saidl, remember they may not all work! Is there anything else you could add to the sentence to improve it? Watch the giving an example on the first page. Then, use , or to label and write and explain your choices. Once finished, check over your sentence and use to upload to class journal.