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Original sentence:
She once tried to draw me a Darth Vader, but it ended up looking like some weird mushroom-shaped robot.
Look at the following sentences and find what has changed. What is the effect of the change:
1. She once tried to draw me a Darth Vader but it ended up looking like some weird mushroom-shaped robot.
2. She once tried to draw me a Darth Vader, it ended up looking like some weird mushroom-shaped robot.
3. She once try to draw me a Darth Vader, but it ended up looking like some weird mushroom-shaped robot.
Amy Zimmerman
Patterns of Power 18.3 - The Draw of a Compound Sentence: Coordinating Contrast (Invitation to Edit)
Grades:
4th Grade,
5th Grade,
3rd Grade
Subjects:
English Language Arts
Standards:
Student Instructions
What did we learn about writing from R.J. Palacio?