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Original sentence:
Before she lost her nerve, she stepped over the invisible line and onto the trail.
Look at the following sentences and find what has changed. What is the effect of the change:
1. Before she lost her nerve. She stepped over the invisible line and onto the trail.
2. Before she lost her nerve, she stepped over the invisible line and into the trail.
3. Before she lost her nerve she stepped over the invisible line and onto the trail.
Amy Zimmerman
Patterns of Power 20.4 - Before You Lose Your Nerve: AAAWWUBBIS Continued (Invitation to Edit)
Grades:
5th Grade,
4th Grade,
3rd Grade
Subjects:
English Language Arts
Student Instructions
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