1. Look at the attached image. You are going to recreate the moment in time through descriptive writing. 2. Remember to edit! What did you include in your writing?? Interesting Adjectives Strong Adverbs Similes Metaphors Onomatopoeia Different sentence lengths and structures full stops Capitals Anything else? 3. Ask a partner to peer assess your work . You will their peer assessment (including their name!!!) into the comments under your post! When peer assessing someone else's work, use the burger technique! What did they do well? What could they improve on?