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Original sentences: Fists of rain pummel the cockpit windshield. Rivers of quicksilver darkness drown the moon. Look at the following sentences and find what has changed. What is the effect of the change: 1. Fists of rain pummels the cockpit windshield. Rivers of quicksilver darkness drown the moon. 2. Fists of rain pummel the cockpit windshield rivers of quicksilver darkness drown the moon. 3. Fists of rain pummel the cockpit windshield. The moon is drowned by rivers of quicksilver darkness.

Amy Zimmerman

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Patterns of Power 6.5 - Rain Pummeled the Ground Versus The Ground Was Pummeled by Rain: Finding Your Active Voice (Invitation to Edit)

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3rd Grade, 5th Grade, 4th Grade, English Language Arts
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