Original sentences:
Fists of rain pummel the cockpit windshield.
Rivers of quicksilver darkness drown the moon.
Look at the following sentences and find what has changed. What is the effect of the change:
1. Fists of rain pummels the cockpit windshield. Rivers of quicksilver darkness drown the moon.
2. Fists of rain pummel the cockpit windshield rivers of quicksilver darkness drown the moon.
3. Fists of rain pummel the cockpit windshield. The moon is drowned by rivers of quicksilver darkness.