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When you're done you've just begun! I can... ADD FULL SENTENCES to revise my scene. Steps to using your revising checklist to ADD FULL SENTENCES 1. Flip open your revising checklist and write today's date. I've attached it in case you need it. 2. Start with your lead. Read your draft and add more exciting sentences. 3. Check the lead box and move on to the next area. Add more sentences Take a picture of your REVISION and upload to this activity Remember no one likes FLAT characters! Great writers go back and add more details to their writing by saying more. This makes their writing more exciting and helps the reader make a movie in their head. I'm sorry I was talking so fast, but I didn't have enough time as we're only allowed very short videos on Seesaw. Can you spot the mistake, we’ll correct it during our final read through when we edit.