So what do you do when you finish your first draft? Getting feedback from others is important. 1) Read the attached first draft. 2)Using 2 Stars and a Wish.... -Tell two things that the author did well on this piece of writing.(Stars) -Tell one thing that you think it is important for them to do to improve it. (Wish- Candle) Be specific about what they did well or what they need to improve. Saying it is 'good' is not helpful- what exactly was good? What do they need to improve? Write and record your feedback as text and speech on the template.