Instructions for Pupils
Add a copy.
Match the improved comment with the first one.
Record yourself saying which are the better comments.
Click the green tick two times to save.
Teacher Notes (not visible to pupils)
This digital citizenship and literacy activity aims to improve the quality of students comments on each other's work. We take a common comment and improve it. This is one of two activities differentiated. In this version, the improvements are labels and students match the improved comment to the original. In the other version students write or record their own improved version of the comments.