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Original sentence:
Gertie stared at Junior until his voice dried up like a raisin.
Look at the following sentences and find what has changed. What is the effect of the change:
1. Gertie stared at Junior, until his voice dried up like a raisin.
2. Gertie stared at junior until his voice dried up like a raisin.
3. Gertie stared at Junior until his voice dried up as it were a raisin.
Amy Zimmerman
Patterns of Power 20.5 - Plenty of Raisins for No Comma: When the AAAWWUBBIS Isn’t First (Invitation to Edit)
Grades:
3rd Grade,
4th Grade,
5th Grade
Subjects:
English Language Arts
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